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Peace is a cold, crisp winter day after the first substantial snowfall.
It is a cool breath of fresh air on a hot summer day.
Peace is a group of young children, their ignorance, laughter, happiness...
Untouched and seemingly untouchable by cynicism, death, darkness...
Peace is a place unattainable, untouchable, uncorrectable, and indestructible,
bright, clean, pure...
A place of dreams, but remains only that.
Peace is a time...
A time no wait, despite the length, can bring.
A time of silence.
A time when man admits its own inhumanity.
A time when all fighting stops.
A time when everyone pauses to reflect.
A time when the entire world is full of positivity.
A time when time itself stops just to take a deep breath.
Even if for just a moment...

That is peace...
©2009 ~BentMetal64
:iconbentmetal64:

Author's Comments

It was originally intended by me to be lyrics to a song but I realized they had more literature potential than being sung out. So I tweaked what it a little :b

the original is written in my assignment book xD

and now for the origins: one day in English we were about to read a book and our teacher asked us about what our perception of peace was and i wrote this as my answer and read it out loud to the class...

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:iconpophipi:
it needs work. XD

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If you're reading this message, I bet you that you spend a lot of your time staring at glowing rectangles. ;)
:iconbentmetal64:
:|

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And then my head exploded
:iconevilanimepanda:
It does need workk... But its immensely deep... if you read it for a long time... you see the truth in the words... I don't think you even realized that... Good Poem Start

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Makes me wonder whether I can actually draw or not... I wonder if I have the time to ponder this ponderous pondering piece of pondering question of ponderence... and ponderence apparently not a word...
:iconbentmetal64:
i think i did realize that maybe cos i wrote it?

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And then my head exploded
:iconevilanimepanda:
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... I dont know... sometimes I don't realize what I say

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Makes me wonder whether I can actually draw or not... I wonder if I have the time to ponder this ponderous pondering piece of pondering question of ponderence... and ponderence apparently not a word...

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